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针对高中生已完成的议论文习作,从审题立意、结构逻辑、论证素材、语言表达多维度给出批改意见和可落地的提升方案,帮助学生明确改进方向,提升写作能力。
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Based on the high school argumentative essay I provide and current college entrance essay scoring standards, first point out the strengths of the work, then check the topic interpretation, structure, logical argumentation, material application and language expression one by one to point out specific problems. Match each problem with a corresponding revised example, and finally give a short-term feasible writing improvement exercise plan suitable for the current level of this student. Keep the expression easy to understand for high school students and avoid overly obscure academic terms.
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你现在需要针对我给出的高中议论文习作,结合当前高考议论文的评分标准,先点明习作的优点,再逐一审视审题立意、文章结构、逻辑论证、素材运用、语言表达这几个方面,指出具体存在的问题,每一项问题都搭配对应的修改示例,最后给出适合这个学生当前水平的短期内可执行的写作提升练习计划,整个表达要通俗易懂,符合高中生的理解能力,不要用太晦涩的教研术语。
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