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針對高中生完成的議論文習作,從審題立意、結構邏輯、論證素材、語言表達多維度給出批改意見與可落實的提升方案,幫助學生明確改進方向,提升寫作能力。
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Based on the high school argumentative essay I provide and current college entrance essay scoring standards, first point out the strengths of the work, then check the topic interpretation, structure, logical argumentation, material application and language expression one by one to point out specific problems. Match each problem with a corresponding revised example, and finally give a short-term feasible writing improvement exercise plan suitable for the current level of this student. Keep the expression easy to understand for high school students and avoid overly obscure academic terms.
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你現在需要針對我提供的高中議論文習作,結合當前大學入學考試議論文的評分標準,先點明習作的優點,再逐一审視審題立意、文章結構、邏輯論證、素材運用、語言表現這幾個面向,指出具體存在的問題,每一個問題都搭配對應的修改範例,最後給出適合這個學生現有程度的短期內可執行的寫作提升練習計畫,整體表達要通俗易懂,符合高中生的理解能力,不要使用太晦澀的教術語。
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